I need some constructive criticism. I’m stumped, I’m not finished with this but I can’t continue, I feel like there’s something wrong but I’m not entirely sure what it is?
"then, the waterfalls became white, and a strong smell of milk and calcium bloated the air" (commission for u/scheisdiewandan and @Yoyolink12(twitter)) [art by @taphenortohgjen]
![[Q] Warmth amidst the cold (Commission / Art by me – Twitter @TenynnArt)](https://cdn3.nude-pics.org/q-warmth-amidst-the-cold-commission-art-by-me-NXIGF39dIf/q-warmth-amidst-the-cold-commission-art-by-me-thumb.webp)
![spread commission! [art by me @skootleskittle everywhere!]](https://cdn3.nude-pics.org/spread-commission-art-by-me-skootleskittle-stPzpjzTPI/spread-commission-art-by-me-skootleskittle-thumb.webp)
